My Choice Project

I chose to do a revision on my research paper as my choice project. I chose this because I wanted to improve a piece of writing that was something that I enjoyed. On top of this, the research paper was the largest thing that I have ever written. In turn, a large paper like this could give me the most possible practice as possible. I believe that it went fairly well. I mainly focused on the end of my research paper. I wanted to change the end of my research paper so that I could spur the reader to go into further research on top of my research topic. I also worked on creating a more defined "research sandwich" in some areas of my research paper.